| Where's the story? distill the wordage.
shanes gone for two weeks of training so I'm left to my own devices, he doesn't know what an influence he is or maybe he does anyway I have to get busy cause my forst thought was along the lines of oh i can get drunk. |
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| okay now rants, he's ranting out onto the page an unresolved spewing of resentments against his sister. Uh I'm not seeing the self realization he speaks of , also victi menatality tis can only be a book he wrote for himself there is in truth nothing in it for anyone else. |
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| I need to tell him about the head and heart method. |
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| well his s.f. chapter is better but its still all telling not showing and how do i explain that to him eh? i don't know.
I'm lit editing the art mag and i paid 300.00 on my rent so this was a good day. |
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| I don't know what i'm doing but i better start something, if i do all l.a. shit it'll work together. eecch do i have anything to say really. Fuck all |
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